Ray doesn't feel bad that he didn’t get any carnations because he has a new friend named Beth Till I know this because when he was drawing a snake in a tornado she giggled and then turned her head down.
Ray didn’t feel bad at the end of the story when he didn’t get a carnation because he knew he wasn’t lonely anymore. I know this because in the text it said,” As expected, the class officers barged into Ray’s home room with a box of pink carnations... But he didn’t feel so bad. He thought of Mr. Ross reading his note and hoped he’d write back.” Also, it said,” He thought of Beth Till. He’d hoped she’d gotten at least one.” I know that he felt lonely in the first place because he sat by himself, and wished he had a friend.
At the end of the story Ray feels doesn't sad because Ray didn’t get any carnations. I know this because the text said “ Some people got a whole bunch. Others only got one or two. But Ray didn’t get any but he didn't feel so bad. He thought about Mr. Ross reading his note he hopped he’d write back.
At the end of the day ray isn't sad because he got a letter from a girl that laughed at a drawing of his ,and he realized that his name was actually Raymond Edward Fink Jr. In the text it said “ His real name was Raymond Edward Fink Jr”.That's why he wasn't sad at the end of the story.
At the end of the story Ray doesn’t feel bad that he didn’t get any carnations because he was writing a letter and he signed his name and it was Ray fink Jr. and his dad said any time now Raymond and then he found out that his name wasn’t just Ray Fink it was Raymond Edward Fink Jr.and he believed that if you had 5 or more syllables you would have good luck and Raymond Edward Fink Jr. is 7 syllables!
At the end of the story Ray doesn’t feel bad that he doesn’t get any carnations because he doesn’t feel lonely anymore. Text evidence supports this…”As expected, the class officers barged into Ray’s homeroom with a box of pink carnations. They walked among the rows of desks and handed them out. Some got a whole bunch. Others got one or two. Ray didn’t get any he didn’t feel so bad.” It also says “He thought of Beth Till. He hoped she’d gotten at least one carnation.” He doesn’t feel lonely because he felt like he got a new friend like Mr. Ross and Beth Till.
At the end of the story, the reason Ray doesn't feel bad that he doesn’t get any carnations because he knew that Mr. Ross cared and he hoped he would write back, he thought about Beth Till, and he hoped she got a carnation. I know this because on page 15, it says, “ Ray didn’t get any. But he didn’t feel to bad. He thought of Mr. Ross reading his note and hoped he’d write back. He thought of Beth Till. He hoped she’d gotten at least one carnation.”
Ray doesn't feel bad because he remembered that his real name was seven syllables, not two. Also he had almost made a friend, Beth Till. So he did not feel bad. Also I was wondering that he did not give carnations for anyone else.
At the end of the story Ray doesn't feel bad because. He got a note and it made him feel like someone cared about him but the note was from his old friend Len . And he knew he wasn't going to get carnations and he thinks Beth Till likes him on pages 14 and 15
At the end of the story Ray feels okay with no carnations. Because he had written a letter to Mrs.Ross and hoped she would write one back to Ray. He also liked the girl Beth Till. Also you don't need candy you just got to be happy.
At the end of the story Ray doesn’t feel bad that he doesn’t get a carnations because in the text it says “Ray didn’t get any.” “But he didn’t feel so bad.” That shows that Ray didn’t feel bad at all.
At the end of the story the reason Ray doesn’t feel sad is Ray gets a note from Len saying “Hello there, Ray. Long time, yes? I just thought I’d say hello. Your old friend, Len”. This makes him different because it makes him feel cared about.
Ray Fink does not feel bad that he did not get a carnation because he got a note from Mr.Ross and it made Ray feel that someone thought he matured. He didn’t need any carnations, all he wanted was another note from Mr.Ross to make Ray feel good.
Ray didn’t feel so bad because he only wished that Beth Till would get at least one carnation. But at the end of the story He took out a picture with carnations on flowers, and he would give it to Beth Till at lunch.
At the end of the story Ray doesn’t feel bad he didn’t get any carnations because on page 14, the text says that Ray finds a note in a lost “blazer” jacket, and the note says, “Hello ther Ray. Long time yes? I just thought I’d say hello. Your old friend, Len” Ray described the note, “It was like a message in a bottle” After Ray read that note, he felt less lonely. Ray then finds a good friend named Beth Till. They were soon best friends, but when the Class Officers barged in Ray’s home room and saw he didn’t get carnations, he did not feel lonely anymore. He soon did not care about carnations anymore at that point. He felt better and much more mature.
At the end of the story, Ray doesn’t feel bad that he doesn’t get any carnations because on page 14, the text says that Ray finds a note in a guy’s “blazer”, and the note says, “Hello there, Ray. Long time, yes? I just thought I’d say hello. Your old friend, Len”. Ray described the note like a “message in a bottle”. Also, before Ray finds the note Ray describes a girl named Beth Till. Ray made her laugh by a picture that he drew. He was thinking of giving it to her but instead he put it in his science notebook so it would not get wrinkled. If you could go to the beginning of the story and then the end i think in the beginning he dies not feel mature. Then at the end he feels mature.
At the end of the story Ray Fink doesn’t feel bad that he doesn't have a Carnation Ray Fink found a new friend named Beth Till. I know that this makes Ray Fink feel better because Ray Fink didn’t have any friends before.
At the end of the story Ray doesn’t feel bad that he didn’t get any carnations because he wasn’t lonely anymore. He was going to give Beth Till, the only person he’de made laugh since his friend Ryan, a drawing of carnations beside a river. I think that meant that he might have made a new potential friend. Evidence that supports this answer is, “He took out his notebook and drew a picture. It showed a little brook with flowers growing alongside it, blowing in the wind. The flowers were carnations. He’d give it to Beth when he saw her at lunch.”
In this story Ray doesn’t feel bad that he didn’t get a carnations Because when he drew the picture of the snake in the tornado.She giggled and turned her head so that shows that she liked Rays drawings.Another way is The note from Len maybe he felt cared and it said long time no see I thought i’d say hello your old friend.
At the end of the story Ray feels good because Ray didn't care if get any valentines cards because he has a friend. It said in page 15 “They walked among the rows of desks and handed them out. Some people got a whole bunch.Others got just one or two. Ray didn't get any. But he didn't feel so bad.
Ray doesn't feel bad that he didn’t get any carnations because he has a new friend named Beth Till I know this because when he was drawing a snake in a tornado she giggled and then turned her head down.
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DeleteI like your restate, you could put a little more evidence in next time.
DeleteI think you should add a bigger restate.
DeleteMaybe you could try better evidence next time, or try direct quotes or ".
DeleteSame as Leala
DeleteThey're called DIRECT QUOTES Leala.
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DeleteYes, I agree with Leala and Payton. You should use a little more evidence. But other wise great.
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ReplyDeleteNice job on the direct quotes and the evedents. :)
DeleteRay didn’t feel bad at the end of the story when he didn’t get a carnation because he knew he wasn’t lonely anymore. I know this because in the text it said,” As expected, the class officers barged into Ray’s home room with a box of pink carnations... But he didn’t feel so bad. He thought of Mr. Ross reading his note and hoped he’d write back.” Also, it said,” He thought of Beth Till. He’d hoped she’d gotten at least one.” I know that he felt lonely in the first place because he sat by himself, and wished he had a friend.
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DeleteBeth Till is his close to new friend.
DeleteNice job you relay proved your answer was corect.
DeleteI think you could give some examples of how he wasn't lonely anymore.
DeleteI think that you could use a example.
DeleteI like your text evidence.
DeleteHenry,all of my direct quotes ARE my evidence!!! Take a look!!!
DeleteAt the end of the story Ray feels doesn't sad because Ray didn’t get any carnations. I know this because the text said “ Some people got a whole bunch. Others only got one or two. But Ray didn’t get any but he didn't feel so bad. He thought about Mr. Ross reading his note he hopped he’d write back.
ReplyDeleteRay feels dosen't sad because dose not make sense. That is not the question!
DeleteYour restate doese'nt make sense but great details.
DeleteAt the end of the day ray isn't sad because he got a letter from a girl that laughed at a drawing of his ,and he realized that his name was actually Raymond Edward Fink Jr. In the text it said “ His real name was Raymond Edward Fink Jr”.That's why he wasn't sad at the end of the story.
ReplyDeleteAt the end of the story Ray doesn’t feel bad that he didn’t get any carnations because he was writing a letter and he signed his name and it was Ray fink Jr. and his dad said any time now Raymond and then he found out that his name wasn’t just Ray Fink it was Raymond Edward Fink Jr.and he believed that if you had 5 or more syllables you would have good luck and Raymond Edward Fink Jr. is 7 syllables!
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DeleteAt the end of the story Ray doesn’t feel bad that he doesn’t get any carnations because he doesn’t feel lonely anymore. Text evidence supports this…”As expected, the class officers barged into Ray’s homeroom with a box of pink carnations. They walked among the rows of desks and handed them out. Some got a whole bunch. Others got one or two. Ray didn’t get any he didn’t feel so bad.” It also says “He thought of Beth Till. He hoped she’d gotten at least one carnation.” He doesn’t feel lonely because he felt like he got a new friend like Mr. Ross and Beth Till.
ReplyDeleteI agree except you could explain why you thought he felt lonely. It would be better to explain that to your reader!!!
DeleteMaybe you should put where you found that evidence.
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ReplyDeleteThat's good. Why didn't Ray care if he got any carnations or not?
DeleteNice restate Cejay but you could use page numbers too
DeleteAt the end of the story, the reason Ray doesn't feel bad that he doesn’t get any carnations because he knew that Mr. Ross cared and he hoped he would write back, he thought about Beth Till, and he hoped she got a carnation. I know this because on page 15, it says, “ Ray didn’t get any. But he didn’t feel to bad. He thought of Mr. Ross reading his note and hoped he’d write back. He thought of Beth Till. He hoped she’d gotten at least one carnation.”
ReplyDeleteI love it!!!!So next time try and step up the evidence!!!!!
DeleteRay doesn't feel bad because he remembered that his real name was seven syllables, not two. Also he had almost made a friend, Beth Till. So he did not feel bad. Also I was wondering that he did not give carnations for anyone else.
ReplyDeleteBecause on page 12, it says, "Ray wouldn't buy a flower because he suddenly had no friends."
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At the end of the story Ray doesn't feel bad because. He got a note and it made him feel like someone cared about him but the note was from his old friend Len . And he knew he wasn't going to get carnations and he thinks Beth Till likes him on pages 14 and 15
ReplyDeleteAt the end of the story Ray feels okay with no carnations. Because he had written a letter to Mrs.Ross and hoped she would write one back to Ray. He also liked the girl Beth Till. Also you don't need candy you just got to be happy.
ReplyDeleteNice job but next time you should use more text evidence
DeleteAt the end of the story Ray doesn’t feel bad that he doesn’t get a carnations because in the text it says “Ray didn’t get any.” “But he didn’t feel so bad.” That shows that Ray didn’t feel bad at all.
ReplyDeleteNice! Maybe you you could a little more "text evidence next time" :)
DeleteReally nice text evidence Leala! You are good at placing quotation marks in the right place.
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DeleteAt the end of the story the reason Ray doesn’t feel sad is Ray gets a note from Len saying “Hello there, Ray. Long time, yes? I just thought I’d say hello. Your old friend, Len”. This makes him different because it makes him feel cared about.
ReplyDeletecould add some more evidence or maybe tell another reason Ray didn't feel bad that he got more carnations?
DeleteNice detail and direct quotes!
ReplyDeleteRay Fink does not feel bad that he did not get a carnation because he got a note from Mr.Ross and it made Ray feel that someone thought he matured. He didn’t need any carnations, all he wanted was another note from Mr.Ross to make Ray feel good.
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DeleteGood! Maybe you could use a little more text evidence next time! :)
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DeleteRay didn’t feel so bad because he only wished that Beth Till would get at least one carnation. But at the end of the story He took out a picture with carnations on flowers, and he would give it to Beth Till at lunch.
ReplyDeleteAt the end of the story Ray doesn’t feel bad he didn’t get any carnations because on page 14, the text says that Ray finds a note in a lost “blazer” jacket, and the note says, “Hello ther Ray. Long time yes? I just thought I’d say hello. Your old friend, Len” Ray described the note, “It was like a message in a bottle” After Ray read that note, he felt less lonely. Ray then finds a good friend named Beth Till. They were soon best friends, but when the Class Officers barged in Ray’s home room and saw he didn’t get carnations, he did not feel lonely anymore. He soon did not care about carnations anymore at that point. He felt better and much more mature.
ReplyDeleteThat is really good your text evidence is great. Maybe next time use more descriptive language. But although t is great! :)
DeleteAt the end of the story, Ray doesn’t feel bad that he doesn’t get any carnations because on page 14, the text says that Ray finds a note in a guy’s “blazer”, and the note says, “Hello there, Ray. Long time, yes? I just thought I’d say hello. Your old friend, Len”. Ray described the note like a “message in a bottle”. Also, before Ray finds the note Ray describes a girl named Beth Till. Ray made her laugh by a picture that he drew. He was thinking of giving it to her but instead he put it in his science notebook so it would not get wrinkled. If you could go to the beginning of the story and then the end i think in the beginning he dies not feel mature. Then at the end he feels mature.
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ReplyDeleteAt the end of the story Ray Fink doesn’t feel bad that he doesn't have a Carnation Ray Fink found a new friend named Beth Till. I know that this makes Ray Fink feel better because Ray Fink didn’t have any friends before.
At the end of the story Ray doesn’t feel bad that he didn’t get any carnations because he wasn’t lonely anymore. He was going to give Beth Till, the only person he’de made laugh since his friend Ryan, a drawing of carnations beside a river. I think that meant that he might have made a new potential friend. Evidence that supports this answer is, “He took out his notebook and drew a picture. It showed a little brook with flowers growing alongside it, blowing in the wind. The flowers were carnations. He’d give it to Beth when he saw her at lunch.”
ReplyDeleteIn this story Ray doesn’t feel bad that he didn’t get a carnations Because when he drew the picture of the snake in the tornado.She giggled and turned her head so that shows that she liked Rays drawings.Another way is The note from Len maybe he felt cared and it said long time no see I thought i’d say hello your old friend.
ReplyDeleteAt the end of the story Ray feels good because Ray didn't care if get any valentines cards because he has a friend. It said in page 15 “They walked among the rows of desks and handed them out. Some people got a whole bunch.Others got just one or two. Ray didn't get any. But he didn't feel so bad.
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